The Seven Principles of
Effective Writing (Part Four)
by Glenn White
The Lesson or Theme
The first three principles in
this series concerned the writer, the reader, and language or medium of
communication.
The fourth principle is about the lesson or theme. Determine what you want to
teach or inform your reader. This same concept can be applied to fiction and
non-fiction with minor adjustments. In fiction you may want to entertain your
reader but you still must have an overriding theme. It is important you convey
your theme or lesson to the reader whether writing fiction or non-fiction. You
always want your reader to finish reading and come away with something. Let’s
look at how to do that.
What is Truth?
Pilate’s famous question is
never an effective writer’s option. You must know what general theme or lesson
you want your reader to understand. Now, this may not come in the first draft
but at some point you must know and develop your theme. What truth do you want
the reader to know? It may be a simple lesson like, “Crime doesn’t pay.”
John Milton Gregory, The Seven Laws of Teaching, says, “All teaching
must advance in some direction.” Determine what direction you want to take your
reader and have a destination in mind. Where do you want to take your reader?
What truth do you want your reader to know? Then, take them there.
Know Your Reader Revisited
You have heard it said, over and
over again, “Know your audience.” Writing for children is obviously different
than writing for parents. The reason? There is a different level of truth they
understand. Again, Gregory is helpful and says, “The truth to be taught must be
learned through truth already known.”
When you write you must know, generally, the level of your intended reader’s
understanding so you can build on that level of understanding. Gregory says,
“It is easy to add to what is already discovered.” The same applies to fiction
as well as to non-fiction.
For example, writing a sci-fi story means you’ll need to build your fantasy
world upon known truth. Avoid throwing around made-up words and images that
make sense only to you. Write using similes and metaphors then you involve your
reader on a level of their understanding. A good example is The Chronicles
of Narnia where a fantasy world is built upon easily recognized animals and
images. These succeed in teaching powerful truths. Again, know your reader,
involve them in your story, and teach the lesson or theme you have for your
reader.
Solve the Problem
Effective writing is solving a
problem whether it is a fiction or non-fiction story. In non-fiction you’ll
need to present the problem and some sort of a solution. In fiction you’ll need
to create conflict for your characters and present problems for them. Then you
must solve at least some of the problems. Let’s look at three stages of the
problem solving process for your story and/or characters.
The
first stage is where certain things are known and action must be taken but
there is uncertainty. For example, a parent loses a child to illness. The
parent knows what has happened but wonders what to do with the loss. Does the
parent replace the child with a pet, another child, anger, addiction, or a new
mate? There is uncertainty in how to deal with the loss. Every problem begins
with a measure of uncertainty or else it wouldn’t be a problem.
The
person then considers what to do with the available resources to achieve the
desired result or solution. This can be applied to your characters or you can
arrange your non-fiction article so your reader can reach a solution. Keep in
mind that stress is caused because expectations do not meet available
resources.
This
last stage is when someone critically selects and rejects a solution or
solutions to the problem. The basis for the selection and rejection is based on
trial and error, blindly following someone else’s lead, or making a decision
from a prior similar experience. Knowing this can provide rich material for
characters in any story.
Know your theme, know your
reader, present and solve a problem then you will be an effective writer. When
you do that...then you’ll write to inspire!
Related Articles:
The
Seven Principles of Effective Writing (Part Three)
The
Seven Principles of Effective Writing (Part Two)
The
Seven Principles of Effective Writing (Part One)
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